You always remember your first, and as such, this contest will always have a special place in my heart.
Tough choices all around. I sent the entries to an old friend – one of my former English professors in college – and let her make the final call. She had a few favorites based on technical correctness of the form and execution of the theme. She said the following in regards to the entry she finally chose:
“A good haiku is about more than getting the syllabic counts right. Some even argue that the 5-7-5 English format isn’t a true haiku at all, but we’ll ignore that for now. Haiku evokes a sensory response that isn’t limited to one impression. It’s a moment in time at a particular place. It isn’t one feeling or one sensation. To capture that simply and elegantly in a short phrase is limitation enough. To do so syllabically is a real challenge. Her entry accomplished the above in spades. While it may not be considered the most poetic or romantic of the entries, it is the most evocative. I was transported.”
And I have to say that I agreed.







